Chapter One
Global warming, the war on terror, world peace! All
these problems fade in comparison, when it’s a quarter
to midnight on New Year’s Eve and you’re stuck in the
queue to use the toilet. Well, at least that’s how
Rachel felt. ‘Trapped’! Five floors up, in the
ultra-modern, glass clad, Isis nightclub. A slave to the
basic bodily functions and nightclub owners who
prioritize dance floor space as opposed to extra toilet
facilities.
“What is it with the British and their queues anyway?”
reflected Rachel.
To her right she could see straight through the
impregnated glass walls and onto the town square below,
where hundreds of revellers were busying themselves with
fireworks, and alcohol, an interesting combination
Rachel thought. She could also see… “Excuse me are you
in the queue?” asked a voice from behind. Rachel turned
to face the person who posed this very intriguing
question. Staring back at her was a young woman of
medium build, with long black hair. She had very sharp
well-defined facial features: a prominent nose, high
cheekbones, dark blue eyes and lips that looked like
they may have been surgically enhanced. She wore an
elegant, navy blue dress that stopped just above her
knees, which she complimented with black strapless
high-heeled shoes. “Yes I am. Tragic isn’t it?” replied
Rachel. The woman nodded in consent and Rachel turned
her attention back to the queue before her, which moved
forward a few steps. A few steps closer to salvation,
Rachel thought. Salvation being a relatively hygienic
toilet and full-length mirror, in which she could check
her hair, adjust her make up and confirm her overall
appearance. Again gazing through the glass walls at the
revellers outside she remembered that something had
caught her eye earlier, what was it? She looked out at
one of the neighbouring buildings and was sure that she
had seen three people standing in what appeared to be an
office, but the office was now empty. And besides what
was so strange about that? Not everyone has the
privilege of a day off on New Years Eve. What company
owns that building anyway? And what do they do that’s
critical enough for employees to be working so late on
New Years Eve? “Ahhh!” she remembered, there was a
bright flash that appeared to have originated from
inside the office, where the three people were standing,
just a couple of minutes ago. That was what was strange;
the flash appeared to come from the inside and not the
outside of the building. Surely it was just a reflection
of the light from the fireworks outside? Just then, she
was again disturbed, but this time by one of the night
clubs security guards running past her. Rachel could
almost guess exactly where he was going, straight into
the female toilets. A few seconds later another security
guard made an announcement “Ladies can you please use
the toilets on the fourth floor? These toilets will be
closed for the rest of the night. Thank you for your
cooperation”.
The excerpt above was written by The Story We All Wrote
Team
As Rachel awoke on her warm, cozy mattress bed she felt
the cushiness of it envelope her exhausted body. She
didn’t want to wake up from the strange dream she had
that night. An odd sense of excitement was in her dream
and it had to be more interesting than her day-to-day
work at Unicorp. There were rushing security guards, gun
flare and a strange woman who clearly had something to
hide. As the mid-morning sun beat in through the tall
arched windows of her penthouse apartment Rachel
realized she hadn’t been dreaming at all. She was
still wearing her evening clothes from the New Year’s
Eve gala at the “Isis”. Did she have a hangover? She
wasn’t sure. She sat up in bed moving as rapidly as a
decrepit old woman. She rubbed her eyes and lay back
down on her mattress to stretch her body. Every muscle
seemed to have been exercised beyond their limits last
night. She had been running to an elevator and that
woman was there…. that woman. Rachel shook her head as
if that would jar some cobweb-coated memory to the
forefront of her brain. “She didn’t mention her name
but she looked vaguely familiar. We talked for a while
after we finished using the bathrooms.” Rachel murmured
aloud. She got up and headed to the kitchen for some
coffee. Surely that would clear the menagerie of
clouded thoughts. When she entered the chrome and glass
kitchen Precious, her grey Siamese cat was sitting on
the glimmering counter giving Rachel a disdainful look.
Obviously she had forgotten Precious and her morning
ritual of Elegant Medley’s. Today should have been her
Florentine garden mix with turkey, especially for the
holiday. Rachel rubbed Precious once around the top of
her head and Precious turned to snub her careless
owner. Rachel moved to the other side of the kitchen
where she saw her evening shawl and a pink slip of paper
stuck to the fringes on the end. She picked up the
note. It was torn and had an attractive handwriting on
it. When Rachel picked it off her shawl she could smell
the scent of Magnolias and Peony. That was the
fragrance the strange woman was wearing. Rachel
couldn’t read all of the note as it was smeared and had
gotten wet; what she could read was….”Tom Dob…
Clapham Junc… “
The excerpt above was submitted by Donna on the 22nd
July 2007
Illegible messages on fancy pink paper did nothing to
clear the fuzziness in Rachel’s mind. There was only
one way to clear the cobwebs from her addled brains and
that was a shower followed by a grande cappuccino and
cinnamon Danish from Harvey’s Patisserie on the corner.
Thankful that small Mom and Pop operations – or small
family run businesses as they were called here in the UK
– had to remain open, even on New Year’s Day, Rachel
turned to leave the kitchen. Precious had other ideas,
however, and almost tripped the woman up as the feline
rumba was danced around her ankles. “Okay, okay, I give
in,” she laughed, heading back to the cupboard where she
kept Precious’ costly meals. “You are a spoiled cat,
you know that?” Rachel gently scolded as she reached up
for the tin. “Ow!” A shooting pain stabbed at her
shoulder and she pulled back quickly. Reaching across
her chest with her left arm to rub the tender spot,
Rachel felt a few small abrasions in the skin. The cuts
were not terribly painful, more like a graze, but they
did begin to bleed again as Rachel rubbed at them trying
to gauge their size and shape. What the hell had
happened last night? She couldn’t remember being cut
and she certainly didn’t remember anything which could
have caused her any muscle pain. It almost felt as
though someone had wrenched the joint out of the socket,
or at least pulled strenuously on her arm. This day was
becoming stranger with each passing minute.
Precious meowed again, distracting Rachel
from her ponderings. “Give me a minute, will you?” she
scolded the cat, an action completely out of character
for the normally controlled woman. As the youngest
Mergers and Acquisitions Manager for Unicorp Banking,
Rachel was not used to letting down her emotional
barriers, even in private. At twenty nine years old,
she felt she had her life totally under control so the
fact that she had become annoyed by the cat was
testimony to her unsettled mood. Not knowing what had
happened the night before was really disconcerting,
especially for a woman who, as a rule, drank very little
and normally woke up with her faculties completely
intact, even if others didn’t.
Rachel took a deep breath and reached for
the can again, this time using her left arm. Precious
purred with anticipation, especially when Rachel snapped
up the ring pull and the powerful stench of gourmet cat
food flooded the small kitchen. Rachel spooned the
contents into the dainty white bowl, the words MY
PRECIOUS stencilled on the side in glittery pink
writing; she had purchased two matching bowls at Harrods
as Christmas gifts for the cat. Rachel had not been
exaggerating when she told her cat earlier that she was
spoiled. Precious was almost like a surrogate child for
the dedicated career woman. Rachel put the dish down on
the floor and headed once more for the bathroom hoping
the shower would work its magic on her foggy memory.
Rachel stepped onto the sumptuous marble
tiled floor, the under floor heating warming the hard
stone deliciously. Although her mother was constantly
bemoaning the fact that there was no husband on the
horizon, let alone a grandchild or two, Rachel had to
admit that there were certain advantages to dedicating
herself to her career. Take this apartment, for
example; a high rise city locale with stunning views
over the Thames, carpets so thick you felt like you were
walking on air, Italian silk sofas and up to the minute
gadgetry installed throughout, a walk-in wardrobe with a
shoe rack to die for – all courtesy of Unicorp while she
resided in London. She had heard whispers, though, of a
transfer to New York which made Rachel squirm with
anticipation of the kind of luxury she would be living
in there. Coming from a life of mediocre middle class
back in Baltimore, landing a scholarship at Harvard had
paid off in more ways than one.
Thankfully, the elegant Mon Cherie dress was
undamaged. Rachel slipped off the soft blue satin,
careful not to catch any of the crystal sequins in her
Cartier watch – a gift from her boss, Bob Markham - and
slipped it back onto the hanger she had left on the back
of the door the night before. It was amazing the dress
had not been ruined in her bed and Rachel could not
imagine why she had done such a thing. The dress had
cost over two thousand pounds; that was over four
thousand US dollars. No matter how much money she
earned, Rachel still remembered what four thousand
dollars could buy ‘in the real world’, as her mother put
it, and she was always mindful of every penny. She
considered the purchase of the dress money well spent,
however, especially as it had caught the eye of Roger
Coleman, a visiting high ranking executive from the New
York office. Impressions were, after all, everything.
Rachel showered quickly, wincing again as
she moved her shoulder to soap her slim body. She
decided to forego shampooing her hair for the moment,
perhaps later when her shoulder was better, and finished
her ablutions as quickly as possible. Ten minutes later
she was back in her bedroom pulling out a red t-shirt
and black jeans. She decided to top off the ensemble
with a pair of black thigh length boots and retreated to
the bed to pull them on. She finished unzipping the
first and shifted her weight to ease on the second. She
felt something hard under her left buttock and scooted
over slightly to finish zipping up the boot. She stood
up, stamped her feet slightly to make sure she had a
comfortable fit, and pulled back the duvet.
Rachel’s hand flew to her mouth covering her
gasp of shock. Contrasted against the stiff white sheet
was a small black handgun, its grip ribbed, the barrel
smooth and snubbed. She swallowed nervously, unsure
what she should do next. Should she call the Police or
try to get rid of the damning thing? Obviously the
right thing would be to report it to the authorities but
how could she explain how it had come to be in her
possession? ‘I can’t remember, Officer,’ was just not
going to cut the mustard.
Rachel was jolted from her reverie when her
mobile phone, which was sitting on the bedside table,
vibrated rapidly, skitting across the smooth glass
surface. She stared at the object, assumed guilt
steeling its icy fingers round her heart for a few
seconds before realisation snapped her mind back to
reality. It’s okay, she thought, it’s just the phone.
Rachel reached for the slim silver Motorola,
her thumb nail slipping into the crevice and snapping it
open. “Hello?”
“Rachel, it’s Carolyn.”
“Carolyn?” she answered, confusion locked
horns with a fragment of memory as they jostled for
supremacy in her conscious mind.
“Carolyn Dade, you remember… from last
night?”
An image of the woman from Isis popped sharply into
focus and Rachel knew instinctively this woman was a
major piece of the puzzle from last night. “Oh yes,
Carolyn,” she said trying to cover her hesitation, “How
can I help you?”
“Do you still have the gun?”
“The gun?” Rachel’s eyes flew in alarm to the offending
object.
“Oh come on, Rachel, this innocent act is becoming very
tiresome. Yes, the gun. My gun… the one I asked you to
hold for me last night. Do you still have it?”
“Yes… I’m looking at it right now.”
“Great!” the relief in Carolyn’s voice was audible over
the telephone. “I’m outside your building now. Oh, and
Rachel?”
“Yes?”
“Try to remember who I am when the doorman asks if I can
be buzzed up, will you?”
The excerpt above was submitted by Amanda on the 26th
August 2007.
Carolyn’s mind drifted over the night’s events as
she watched the red numerals above the elevator door
change slowly. Though not quite the penthouse,
Rachel’s apartment was in a very elevated spot in
the building so Carolyn had plenty of time to run
things through her mind before she reached the fifty
fourth floor.
She couldn’t believe Intel had screwed things up
like that? How could they have been stupid enough
to get the damn building wrong? Sure, they had
identified the correct area, but they had pinpointed
the job as going down in the nightclub instead of in
the newspaper office opposite. She thought she knew
who had fucked up – that little jerk, Jones. She’d
never been able to figure out why he’d been
recruited in the first place, for all the good he
did. Sure, he was a good hacker and, God knew, they
needed one, but he didn’t seem to be able to follow
the threads of evidence. If you gave him an
instruction, he could pull it off, but ask him to
work on his initiative and you took your chances on
what he came up with. When she got back to D.C.
she was going to speak to Bob about having him
reassigned, perhaps with a handler. This job was
just too risky to be left in the hands of a third
rate amateur.
Okay, so she could see how the mistake had been
made. Intel had identified Rachel on the VIP list
for Isis and had put two and two together.
Unfortunately, this time, they had come up with
five, but she supposed anybody could have made that
mistake. Once they’d found her name they’d just
neglected to follow it up any further. It still
grated on her nerves, however, that she’d been put
on babysitting detail with the woman instead of
following up on the real job. D.C. were still
convinced that something would go down involving
Rachel, however, and her name had cropped up at the
end of a number of threads, so there must be
something in it. Until they knew what that
something was, however, she would just have to keep
her eye on the woman and hope that it would all
become clear. Despite spiking Rachel’s drink last
night still she hadn’t managed to get any useful
information out of her. It seemed, if there was
something going down with her involved, the
Acquisitions Manager didn’t know anything about it.
Leaving the gun planted in her bed had been a good
ploy, however, and one Carolyn was rather proud of.
Now, with the woman’s memory loss seemingly still
apparent, she could keep Rachel dangling on the hook
regarding her involvement in something shady without
revealing her own position. Yes, planting that
replica pistol had been a stroke of genius!
The elevator door slid silently open to reveal a
sumptuously decorated corridor. Even here, in the
public areas, the building was amazing. Carolyn had
never known any kind of luxury as the only child of
a Marine Sergeant and she, herself, had been
recruited straight into the service immediately upon
graduation. Sure, she had a few dollars tucked away
in her savings accounts – both the official one and
her security box - one of the perks of doing the
type of work she did, but nothing which would get
her anywhere near this kind of lifestyle.
Occasional tables dotted the length of the corridor,
each topped with magnificent arrays of fresh
flowers. The wall lights were exquisitely styled,
though simply designed, and they added a warm glow
to the room. Carolyn found Rachel’s door at the far
end of the corridor, and pressed the doorbell with
her gloved finger – no need to leave unnecessary
fingerprints lying around where anyone could find
them!
Rachel looked frazzled when she opened the door,
though she obviously recognised Carolyn the minute
she saw her. “Hi, come on in.” She swept her arm
back in welcome and the dark haired woman swept past
her. If anything, the apartment was even more
luxurious than the hallway and Carolyn stopped a
slight feeling of envy rising from her gut.
“Nice place you’ve got here. Must have cost you a
fortune?”
“Thanks, but it’s not mine. It belongs to my
employer and I’m just lucky enough to get to use it
while I’m here in London. My parents
think it’s way too extravagant.”
That made Carolyn a bit more sympathetic to the
woman. Maybe she could relate to her after all.
“Nice work if you can get it, huh?”
Rachel caught the slight note of jealously in the
woman’s voice, but she chose to ignore it. A lot of
people treated her like this when the first met
her. They didn’t realise that she had worked hard
to get where she was, that she had made a lot of
enemies along the way, climbing over people on her
rise to the top. Though she had never intentionally
set out to hurt anyone, to make even a single person
resent her, it seemed part of the job and just
something she had had to learn to live with. This
woman’s reaction was no surprise. “Shall we go
through to the lounge? There are a few things I
want to ask you."
The women walked through, Carolyn's eyes everywhere
though Rachel got the feeling she wasn't just
admiring the decoration. It was as though she was
looking for something. “I was just about to go out
for a coffee when you called but I can whip up a pot
if you want?”
“Not right now, thanks. Maybe we could go out for
that coffee in a little bit, after we clear up a few
things first?”
Rachel nodded. It seemed Carolyn was being as
guarded as she herself was. Something fishy was
definitely going on. She sat down on one of the two
sofas and her visitor chose the one opposite. The
two women sat facing each other, each waiting for
the other to speak. Rachel’s questions bubbled to
the surface and her curiosity got the better of
her. “How exactly did I end up with your gun?”
The excerpt above was submitted by Amanda on the 26th
August 2007.
“Before
we get into that, do you think I can have it back
please?” Carolyn’s forceful gaze almost made Rachel
back down from her conviction, but she steadied her
resolve and met the woman’s stare.
“In a minute,” she was relieved to hear
her nervousness did not make her voice quaver.
“First of all I want an explanation for last night.”
“I don’t follow; what exactly do you
want me to explain that you don’t already know?”
“Well why don’t you tell me how things
went down from your perspective?” Rachel prayed her
bluff would work but it seemed, from Carolyn’s
reactions, that things weren’t going quite to plan.
Carolyn leapt to her feet in anger, her
hands flying to hips in an aggressive pose. “Are
you being deliberately obtuse? Stop pissing me
about, Rachel, and get my gun!”
“No!” Rachel couldn’t believe how tough
she was being, especially as she was completely
terrified. “I need to know what happened last
night. I…I…I don’t remember – it’s all a blank!”
Carolyn sat back down, a small smile
playing on her lips. “Well, why didn’t you say so
in the first place? It seems I have you at a bit of
a disadvantage then, don’t I?” She reached over and
snagged her bag and slipped her hand inside.
Considering the circumstances Rachel didn’t know
what the woman was going to pull out. To her
relief, all she pulled from the small clutch bag was
a simple black wallet. Carolyn flipped the wallet
open to reveal a photo Department of Defence
identification and Rachel gasped in surprise. Below
the insignia, next to the photograph of the woman in
full military uniform, were the words ‘Major Carolyn
Dade’. “Now,” said Carolyn settling back on the
sofa once again, “Why don’t you go get my gun and
I’ll fill in a few of those gaps for you?”
Rachel walked to her bedroom in a daze.
What the hell was going on here and how had she
gotten involved with the D.O.D. for God’s sake? And
then there was Carolyn herself; she certainly didn’t
look like a Major. If anything she looked more like
a fashion model with her plumped up lips and drop
dead gorgeous body.
She retrieved the weapon from where it
still sat on her bed and turned it over in her
hand. Strangely it felt quite light so, after
looking back down the hallway to make sure Carolyn
had not followed her, she slipped the clip out of
the chamber and was surprised to find it empty. The
weapon held no bullets; why? Had Carolyn emptied
the clip prior to leaving it with her or had the
weapon expended it’s bullets in a more conventional
manner? My God, though Rachel, what if I’m the one
who fired it? She almost dropped the gun with
fright when an idea came to her – she sniffed the
muzzle for a trace of gun powder and, thank God, all
she smelt was gun oil.
“You seem to know what you’re doing with
that.” Rachel jumped and turned to see Carolyn
standing in the doorway holding out her hand. “May
I have it back please?”
Rachel grudgingly handed over the weapon
but she met the woman’s hard stare head-on. Now
that she knew she was D.O.D. she felt confident
Carolyn wouldn’t harm her; she was after all a sworn
protector of her own country. “Yes I know how to
handle a gun,” she replied. “I’m licensed and I
have my own weapon back home.”
“Yes I know,” replied Carolyn smugly.
“You used to go shooting with your father at Codorus
Creek when you were younger.” Rachel stared open
mouthed at the woman. “Washington has a nice fat file with your name
on it and you can rest assured I read it from cover
to cover… twice!”
Rachel’s knees gave way but, thankfully,
the bed cushioned the blow as sat down hard.
“What?” She finally found her voice and spurred her
vocal chords into gear. “What on earth does the
D.O.D. want to know about me? I’ve never broken a
law in my life!”
“That,” replied Carolyn, “still remains
to be seen. The Pentagon hasn’t decided yet whether
or not you are a security risk – that’s why they
sent me.”
“Please, Carolyn…Colonel –“
“Major,”
“Sorry… Major… I don’t understand. What
possible threat could I be to National Security?
I’m just a lowly acquisitions manager.”
“’Lowly’ is not a word I would associate
with you, Ms Page, but you can bet your ass that if
you are a threat – and believe me I intend to find
out – then you will tell me everything
I need to know.” Carolyn took a clip from her
pocket and slipped it into the handgun, but not
before Rachel had a chance to see the shiny casings
of the bullets it contained. She pointed the loaded
weapon menacingly at Rachel and flicked the barrel
in the direction of the living room twice in quick
succession. “Shall we go through where it’s more
comfortable?”
Now no longer sure that her earlier
convictions of her safety in Carolyn’s presence were
correct, Rachel got quickly off the bed and led the
way to the lounge. At the Major’s instruction she
sat down on the sofa beside Precious and reached out
a hand to stroke the cat’s soft fur; anything to
bring a touch of realism back to this otherwise
surreal day. So much for a happy new year, she
thought.
Carolyn took her earlier position on the
opposite sofa facing Rachel and, for a minute, she
just sat staring at her across the table.
Eventually Rachel could stand the unnerving silence
no longer. “Well go on then – interrogate me and
get it over with.”
Carolyn laughed softly making Rachel
even more uncomfortable. “What do you suggest I do
first? Should I get the syringe of psychochemical
torture serum from my bag or do you think we’d
better kick off with a game of Russian Roulette?”
Rachel couldn’t tell if the woman was
serious or not, but she did know she’d happily tell
the Major everything she wanted – provided, of
course, she knew what that was. “Please, Carolyn,”
she begged. “Can’t you just tell me what it is you
want to know? I mean I can’t even remember what
happened last night.”
Carolyn chewed the inside of her cheek
for a moment or two thinking over the situation and
seemed to come to a decision. “Okay,” she said
letting the gun rest on her knee within easy reach
but no longer pointing menacingly at Rachel, “I’ll
fill you in on last night.”
Rachel breathed a sigh of relief and
only then realised that her palms had been
sweating. She sat back on the sofa and thought she
was ready for it but nothing could have prepared her
for what she was about to hear.
The excerpt above was submitted by
Amanda on the 29th
November 2007.
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