Chapter One


Global warming, the war on terror, world peace! All these problems fade in comparison, when it’s a quarter to midnight on New Year’s Eve and you’re stuck in the queue to use the toilet. Well, at least that’s how Rachel felt. ‘Trapped’! Five floors up, in the ultra-modern, glass clad, Isis nightclub. A slave to the basic bodily functions and nightclub owners who prioritize dance floor space as opposed to extra toilet facilities. 
“What is it with the British and their queues anyway?” reflected Rachel.

To her right she could see straight through the impregnated glass walls and onto the town square below, where hundreds of revellers were busying themselves with fireworks, and alcohol, an interesting combination Rachel thought. She could also see… “Excuse me are you in the queue?” asked a voice from behind. Rachel turned to face the person who posed this very intriguing question. Staring back at her was a young woman of medium build, with long black hair. She had very sharp well-defined facial features: a prominent nose, high cheekbones, dark blue eyes and lips that looked like they may have been surgically enhanced. She wore an elegant, navy blue dress that stopped just above her knees, which she complimented with black strapless high-heeled shoes. “Yes I am. Tragic isn’t it?” replied Rachel. The woman nodded in consent and Rachel turned her attention back to the queue before her, which moved forward a few steps. A few steps closer to salvation, Rachel thought. Salvation being a relatively hygienic toilet and full-length mirror, in which she could check her hair, adjust her make up and confirm her overall appearance. Again gazing through the glass walls at the revellers outside she remembered that something had caught her eye earlier, what was it? She looked out at one of the neighbouring buildings and was sure that she had seen three people standing in what appeared to be an office, but the office was now empty. And besides what was so strange about that? Not everyone has the privilege of a day off on New Years Eve. What company owns that building anyway? And what do they do that’s critical enough for employees to be working so late on New Years Eve? “Ahhh!” she remembered, there was a bright flash that appeared to have originated from inside the office, where the three people were standing, just a couple of minutes ago. That was what was strange; the flash appeared to come from the inside and not the outside of the building. Surely it was just a reflection of the light from the fireworks outside? Just then, she was again disturbed, but this time by one of the night clubs security guards running past her. Rachel could almost guess exactly where he was going, straight into the female toilets. A few seconds later another security guard made an announcement “Ladies can you please use the toilets on the fourth floor? These toilets will be closed for the rest of the night. Thank you for your cooperation”.

The excerpt above was written by The Story We All Wrote Team

As Rachel awoke on her warm, cozy mattress bed she felt the cushiness of it envelope her exhausted body.  She didn’t want to wake up from the strange dream she had that night. An odd sense of excitement was in her dream and it had to be more interesting than her day-to-day work at Unicorp. There were rushing security guards, gun flare and a strange woman who clearly had something to hide.  As the mid-morning sun beat in through the tall arched windows of her penthouse apartment Rachel realized she hadn’t been dreaming at all.   She was still wearing her evening clothes from the New Year’s Eve gala at the “Isis”.  Did she have a hangover?  She wasn’t sure.  She sat up in bed moving as rapidly as a decrepit old woman.  She rubbed her eyes and lay back down on her mattress to stretch her body.  Every muscle seemed to have been exercised beyond their limits last night.  She had been running to an elevator and that woman was there…. that woman.  Rachel shook her head as if that would jar some cobweb-coated memory to the forefront of her brain.  “She didn’t mention her name but she looked vaguely familiar. We talked for a while after we finished using the bathrooms.” Rachel murmured aloud.  She got up and headed to the kitchen for some coffee.  Surely that would clear the menagerie of clouded thoughts.  When she entered the chrome and glass kitchen Precious, her grey Siamese cat was sitting on the glimmering counter giving Rachel a disdainful look.  Obviously she had forgotten Precious and her morning ritual of Elegant Medley’s.  Today should have been her Florentine garden mix with turkey, especially for the holiday.  Rachel rubbed Precious once around the top of her head and Precious turned to snub her careless owner.  Rachel moved to the other side of the kitchen where she saw her evening shawl and a pink slip of paper stuck to the fringes on the end.  She picked up the note.  It was torn and had an attractive handwriting on it.  When Rachel picked it off her shawl she could smell the scent of Magnolias and Peony.  That was the fragrance the strange woman was wearing.  Rachel couldn’t read all of the note as it was smeared and had gotten wet; what she could read was….”Tom Dob… Clapham Junc… “

The excerpt above was submitted by Donna on the 22nd July 2007

Illegible messages on fancy pink paper did nothing to clear the fuzziness in Rachel’s mind.  There was only one way to clear the cobwebs from her addled brains and that was a shower followed by a grande cappuccino and cinnamon Danish from Harvey’s Patisserie on the corner.  Thankful that small Mom and Pop operations – or small family run businesses as they were called here in the UK – had to remain open, even on New Year’s Day, Rachel turned to leave the kitchen.  Precious had other ideas, however, and almost tripped the woman up as the feline rumba was danced around her ankles.  “Okay, okay, I give in,” she laughed, heading back to the cupboard where she kept Precious’ costly meals.  “You are a spoiled cat, you know that?” Rachel gently scolded as she reached up for the tin.  “Ow!”  A shooting pain stabbed at her shoulder and she pulled back quickly.  Reaching across her chest with her left arm to rub the tender spot, Rachel felt a few small abrasions in the skin.  The cuts were not terribly painful, more like a graze, but they did begin to bleed again as Rachel rubbed at them trying to gauge their size and shape.  What the hell had happened last night?  She couldn’t remember being cut and she certainly didn’t remember anything which could have caused her any muscle pain.  It almost felt as though someone had wrenched the joint out of the socket, or at least pulled strenuously on her arm.  This day was becoming stranger with each passing minute. 

            Precious meowed again, distracting Rachel from her ponderings.  “Give me a minute, will you?” she scolded the cat, an action completely out of character for the normally controlled woman.  As the youngest Mergers and Acquisitions Manager for Unicorp Banking, Rachel was not used to letting down her emotional barriers, even in private.  At twenty nine years old, she felt she had her life totally under control so the fact that she had become annoyed by the cat was testimony to her unsettled mood.  Not knowing what had happened the night before was really disconcerting, especially for a woman who, as a rule, drank very little and normally woke up with her faculties completely intact, even if others didn’t. 

            Rachel took a deep breath and reached for the can again, this time using her left arm.  Precious purred with anticipation, especially when Rachel snapped up the ring pull and the powerful stench of gourmet cat food flooded the small kitchen.  Rachel spooned the contents into the dainty white bowl, the words MY PRECIOUS stencilled on the side in glittery pink writing; she had purchased two matching bowls at Harrods as Christmas gifts for the cat.  Rachel had not been exaggerating when she told her cat earlier that she was spoiled.  Precious was almost like a surrogate child for the dedicated career woman.  Rachel put the dish down on the floor and headed once more for the bathroom hoping the shower would work its magic on her foggy memory.

            Rachel stepped onto the sumptuous marble tiled floor, the under floor heating warming the hard stone deliciously.  Although her mother was constantly bemoaning the fact that there was no husband on the horizon, let alone a grandchild or two, Rachel had to admit that there were certain advantages to dedicating herself to her career.  Take this apartment, for example; a high rise city locale with stunning views over the Thames, carpets so thick you felt like you were walking on air, Italian silk sofas and up to the minute gadgetry installed throughout, a walk-in wardrobe with a shoe rack to die for – all courtesy of Unicorp while she resided in London.  She had heard whispers, though, of a transfer to New York which made Rachel squirm with anticipation of the kind of luxury she would be living in there.  Coming from a life of mediocre middle class back in Baltimore, landing a scholarship at Harvard had paid off in more ways than one. 

            Thankfully, the elegant Mon Cherie dress was undamaged.  Rachel slipped off the soft blue satin, careful not to catch any of the crystal sequins in her Cartier watch – a gift from her boss, Bob Markham - and slipped it back onto the hanger she had left on the back of the door the night before.   It was amazing the dress had not been ruined in her bed and Rachel could not imagine why she had done such a thing.  The dress had cost over two thousand pounds; that was over four thousand US dollars.  No matter how much money she earned, Rachel still remembered what four thousand dollars could buy ‘in the real world’, as her mother put it, and she was always mindful of every penny.  She considered the purchase of the dress money well spent, however, especially as it had caught the eye of Roger Coleman, a visiting high ranking executive from the New York office.  Impressions were, after all, everything. 

            Rachel showered quickly, wincing again as she moved her shoulder to soap her slim body.  She decided to forego shampooing her hair for the moment, perhaps later when her shoulder was better, and finished her ablutions as quickly as possible.  Ten minutes later she was back in her bedroom pulling out a red t-shirt and black jeans.  She decided to top off the ensemble with a pair of black thigh length boots and retreated to the bed to pull them on.  She finished unzipping the first and shifted her weight to ease on the second.  She felt something hard under her left buttock and scooted over slightly to finish zipping up the boot.  She stood up, stamped her feet slightly to make sure she had a comfortable fit, and pulled back the duvet.

            Rachel’s hand flew to her mouth covering her gasp of shock.  Contrasted against the stiff white sheet was a small black handgun, its grip ribbed, the barrel smooth and snubbed.  She swallowed nervously, unsure what she should do next.  Should she call the Police or try to get rid of the damning thing?  Obviously the right thing would be to report it to the authorities but how could she explain how it had come to be in her possession?  ‘I can’t remember, Officer,’ was just not going to cut the mustard.

            Rachel was jolted from her reverie when her mobile phone, which was sitting on the bedside table, vibrated rapidly, skitting across the smooth glass surface.  She stared at the object, assumed guilt steeling its icy fingers round her heart for a few seconds before realisation snapped her mind back to reality.  It’s okay, she thought, it’s just the phone.

            Rachel reached for the slim silver Motorola, her thumb nail slipping into the crevice and snapping it open.  “Hello?”

            “Rachel, it’s Carolyn.”

            “Carolyn?” she answered, confusion locked horns with a fragment of memory as they jostled for supremacy in her conscious mind.

            “Carolyn Dade, you remember… from last night?” 

An image of the woman from Isis popped sharply into focus and Rachel knew instinctively this woman was a major piece of the puzzle from last night.  “Oh yes, Carolyn,” she said trying to cover her hesitation, “How can I help you?”

“Do you still have the gun?”

“The gun?”  Rachel’s eyes flew in alarm to the offending object.

“Oh come on, Rachel, this innocent act is becoming very tiresome.  Yes, the gun.  My gun… the one I asked you to hold for me last night.  Do you still have it?”

“Yes… I’m looking at it right now.”

“Great!” the relief in Carolyn’s voice was audible over the telephone.  “I’m outside your building now.  Oh, and Rachel?”

“Yes?”

“Try to remember who I am when the doorman asks if I can be buzzed up, will you?”

The excerpt above was submitted by Amanda on the 26th August 2007.

Carolyn’s mind drifted over the night’s events as she watched the red numerals above the elevator door change slowly.  Though not quite the penthouse, Rachel’s apartment was in a very elevated spot in the building so Carolyn had plenty of time to run things through her mind before she reached the fifty fourth floor. 

She couldn’t believe Intel had screwed things up like that?  How could they have been stupid enough to get the damn building wrong?  Sure, they had identified the correct area, but they had pinpointed the job as going down in the nightclub instead of in the newspaper office opposite.  She thought she knew who had fucked up – that little jerk, Jones.  She’d never been able to figure out why he’d been recruited in the first place, for all the good he did.  Sure, he was a good hacker and, God knew, they needed one, but he didn’t seem to be able to follow the threads of evidence.  If you gave him an instruction, he could pull it off, but ask him to work on his initiative and you took your chances on what he came up with.   When she got back to D.C. she was going to speak to Bob about having him reassigned, perhaps with a handler.  This job was just too risky to be left in the hands of a third rate amateur.

Okay, so she could see how the mistake had been made.  Intel had identified Rachel on the VIP list for Isis and had put two and two together.  Unfortunately, this time, they had come up with five, but she supposed anybody could have made that mistake.  Once they’d found her name they’d just neglected to follow it up any further.  It still grated on her nerves, however, that she’d been put on babysitting detail with the woman instead of following up on the real job.  D.C. were still convinced that something would go down involving Rachel, however, and her name had cropped up at the end of a number of threads, so there must be something in it.  Until they knew what that something was, however, she would just have to keep her eye on the woman and hope that it would all become clear.  Despite spiking Rachel’s drink last night still she hadn’t managed to get any useful information out of her.   It seemed, if there was something going down with her involved, the Acquisitions Manager didn’t know anything about it.  Leaving the gun planted in her bed had been a good ploy, however, and one Carolyn was rather proud of.  Now, with the woman’s memory loss seemingly still apparent, she could keep Rachel dangling on the hook regarding her involvement in something shady without revealing her own position.   Yes, planting that replica pistol had been a stroke of genius!

The elevator door slid silently open to reveal a sumptuously decorated corridor.  Even here, in the public areas, the building was amazing.  Carolyn had never known any kind of luxury as the only child of a Marine Sergeant and she, herself, had been recruited straight into the service immediately upon graduation.  Sure, she had a few dollars tucked away in her savings accounts – both the official one and her security box - one of the perks of doing the type of work she did, but nothing which would get her anywhere near this kind of lifestyle.  Occasional tables dotted the length of the corridor, each topped with magnificent arrays of fresh flowers.  The wall lights were exquisitely styled, though simply designed, and they added a warm glow to the room.  Carolyn found Rachel’s door at the far end of the corridor, and pressed the doorbell with her gloved finger – no need to leave unnecessary fingerprints lying around where anyone could find them!

Rachel looked frazzled when she opened the door, though she obviously recognised Carolyn the minute she saw her.  “Hi, come on in.”  She swept her arm back in welcome and the dark haired woman swept past her.  If anything, the apartment was even more luxurious than the hallway and Carolyn stopped a slight feeling of envy rising from her gut. 

“Nice place you’ve got here.  Must have cost you a fortune?”

“Thanks, but it’s not mine.  It belongs to my employer and I’m just lucky enough to get to use it while I’m here in London.  My parents think it’s way too extravagant.”

That made Carolyn a bit more sympathetic to the woman.  Maybe she could relate to her after all.  “Nice work if you can get it, huh?”

Rachel caught the slight note of jealously in the woman’s voice, but she chose to ignore it.  A lot of people treated her like this when the first met her.   They didn’t realise that she had worked hard to get where she was, that she had made a lot of enemies along the way, climbing over people on her rise to the top.  Though she had never intentionally set out to hurt anyone, to make even a single person resent her, it seemed part of the job and just something she had had to learn to live with.  This woman’s reaction was no surprise.  “Shall we go through to the lounge?  There are a few things I want to ask you."

The women walked through, Carolyn's eyes everywhere though Rachel got the feeling she wasn't just admiring the decoration.  It was as though she was looking for something. “I was just about to go out for a coffee when you called but I can whip up a pot if you want?”

“Not right now, thanks.  Maybe we could go out for that coffee in a little bit, after we clear up a few things first?”

Rachel nodded.   It seemed Carolyn was being as guarded as she herself was.  Something fishy was definitely going on.  She sat down on one of the two sofas and her visitor chose the one opposite.  The two women sat facing each other, each waiting for the other to speak.  Rachel’s questions bubbled to the surface and her curiosity got the better of her.  “How exactly did I end up with your gun?”

 

The excerpt above was submitted by Amanda on the 26th August 2007.


 
“Before we get into that, do you think I can have it back please?”  Carolyn’s forceful gaze almost made Rachel back down from her conviction, but she steadied her resolve and met the woman’s stare.
            “In a minute,” she was relieved to hear her nervousness did not make her voice quaver.  “First of all I want an explanation for last night.”
            “I don’t follow; what exactly do you want me to explain that you don’t already know?”
            “Well why don’t you tell me how things went down from your perspective?”  Rachel prayed her bluff would work but it seemed, from Carolyn’s reactions, that things weren’t going quite to plan.
            Carolyn leapt to her feet in anger, her hands flying to hips in an aggressive pose.  “Are you being deliberately obtuse?  Stop pissing me about, Rachel, and get my gun!”
            “No!”  Rachel couldn’t believe how tough she was being, especially as she was completely terrified.  “I need to know what happened last night.  I…I…I don’t remember – it’s all a blank!”
            Carolyn sat back down, a small smile playing on her lips.  “Well, why didn’t you say so in the first place?  It seems I have you at a bit of a disadvantage then, don’t I?”  She reached over and snagged her bag and slipped her hand inside.  Considering the circumstances Rachel didn’t know what the woman was going to pull out.  To her relief, all she pulled from the small clutch bag was a simple black wallet.  Carolyn flipped the wallet open to reveal a photo Department of Defence identification and Rachel gasped in surprise.  Below the insignia, next to the photograph of the woman in full military uniform, were the words ‘Major Carolyn Dade’.  “Now,” said Carolyn settling back on the sofa once again, “Why don’t you go get my gun and I’ll fill in a few of those gaps for you?”
            Rachel walked to her bedroom in a daze.  What the hell was going on here and how had she gotten involved with the D.O.D. for God’s sake?  And then there was Carolyn herself; she certainly didn’t look like a Major.  If anything she looked more like a fashion model with her plumped up lips and drop dead gorgeous body.
            She retrieved the weapon from where it still sat on her bed and turned it over in her hand.  Strangely it felt quite light so, after looking back down the hallway to make sure Carolyn had not followed her, she slipped the clip out of the chamber and was surprised to find it empty.  The weapon held no bullets; why?  Had Carolyn emptied the clip prior to leaving it with her or had the weapon expended it’s bullets in a more conventional manner?  My God, though Rachel, what if I’m the one who fired it?  She almost dropped the gun with fright when an idea came to her – she sniffed the muzzle for a trace of gun powder and, thank God, all she smelt was gun oil.
            “You seem to know what you’re doing with that.”  Rachel jumped and turned to see Carolyn standing in the doorway holding out her hand.  “May I have it back please?” 
            Rachel grudgingly handed over the weapon but she met the woman’s hard stare head-on.  Now that she knew she was D.O.D. she felt confident Carolyn wouldn’t harm her; she was after all a sworn protector of her own country.  “Yes I know how to handle a gun,” she replied.  “I’m licensed and I have my own weapon back home.”
            “Yes I know,” replied Carolyn smugly.  “You used to go shooting with your father at Codorus Creek when you were younger.”  Rachel stared open mouthed at the woman.  “Washington has a nice fat file with your name on it and you can rest assured I read it from cover to cover… twice!”
            Rachel’s knees gave way but, thankfully, the bed cushioned the blow as sat down hard.  “What?” She finally found her voice and spurred her vocal chords into gear.  “What on earth does the D.O.D. want to know about me?  I’ve never broken a law in my life!”
            “That,” replied Carolyn, “still remains to be seen.  The Pentagon hasn’t decided yet whether or not you are a security risk – that’s why they sent me.”
            “Please, Carolyn…Colonel –“
            “Major,”
            “Sorry… Major… I don’t understand.  What possible threat could I be to National Security?  I’m just a lowly acquisitions manager.”
            “’Lowly’ is not a word I would associate with you, Ms Page, but you can bet your ass that if you are a threat – and believe me I intend to find out – then you will tell me everything I need to know.”  Carolyn took a clip from her pocket and slipped it into the handgun, but not before Rachel had a chance to see the shiny casings of the bullets it contained.  She pointed the loaded weapon menacingly at Rachel and flicked the barrel in the direction of the living room twice in quick succession.  “Shall we go through where it’s more comfortable?”
            Now no longer sure that her earlier convictions of her safety in Carolyn’s presence were correct, Rachel got quickly off the bed and led the way to the lounge.  At the Major’s instruction she sat down on the sofa beside Precious and reached out a hand to stroke the cat’s soft fur; anything to bring a touch of realism back to this otherwise surreal day.  So much for a happy new year, she thought.
            Carolyn took her earlier position on the opposite sofa facing Rachel and, for a minute, she just sat staring at her across the table.   Eventually Rachel could stand the unnerving silence no longer.  “Well go on then – interrogate me and get it over with.”
            Carolyn laughed softly making Rachel even more uncomfortable.  “What do you suggest I do first?  Should I get the syringe of psychochemical torture serum from my bag or do you think we’d better kick off with a game of Russian Roulette?”
            Rachel couldn’t tell if the woman was serious or not, but she did know she’d happily tell the Major everything she wanted – provided, of course, she knew what that was.  “Please, Carolyn,” she begged.  “Can’t you just tell me what it is you want to know?  I mean I can’t even remember what happened last night.”
            Carolyn chewed the inside of her cheek for a moment or two thinking over the situation and seemed to come to a decision.  “Okay,” she said letting the gun rest on her knee within easy reach but no longer pointing menacingly at Rachel, “I’ll fill you in on last night.” 
            Rachel breathed a sigh of relief and only then realised that her palms had been sweating.  She sat back on the sofa and thought she was ready for it but nothing could have prepared her for what she was about to hear.

The excerpt above was submitted by Amanda on the 29th November 2007.

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